My first POEM ever!!

Did some changes to ' ARE YOU STILL PLAYING UR FLUTE poem' in class today..

And the results are so awesome!!!
I gt these inspirations frm Sophia and her new 'bf' Chin JXX Hern, and decided to write down their 'love story'.
This is just for fun yaaa!!!

Type 1 - Girl ver.

Are you still looking at me?

When there is too much time for you to play

I'm feeling boring

To be longing for your face

The face of you that I pictured in my mind

Uncovered by the deep breathe of mine

Coloured by my pastels

Blown by the food

To the depth of my heart

Are you still looking at me?

In the city so busy and noisy 

Amidst the lengluiiss

While here it has become a luxury

To spend time dating with guys

Stalking people through Facebook

Gossiping with friends

Or enjoying the fragrance of you

Are you still looking at me?

The more it disturbs my heartbeat

To be missing you

In the hazard of you

My brothers were married and went for honeymoon

My people are united by messenger

My friend shouted mercilessly

This world is too insane and bleeding

Type 2 - Boy ver.

Are you still going to Perfect Driving Academy?
When there is too little time for us to meet
I'm feeling desperate
To Be longing for your face 
The face of you that I always pictured in my mind
Uncoverd by the haze of Malaysia
Blown by the fan
To the depth of my heart

Are you still looking at me
In the city so busy and noisy
Amidst the lengzaiiss 
While here it has become a luxury
To spend time stalking you 
Gazing at your lovable lips
Collecting your sweet smile
Or enjoying the fragrance of your saliva

Are you still remembering me?
The more it disturbs my mind
To be missing you
In the hazard of you
My younger sisters were happily ever after but not me 
My friends had their partners
This world is too dark and my heart hurts